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Community Guidelines

Astrometrical community guidelines:

Thank you for visiting Astrometrical, on this site you are encouraged to broaden your tastes in art and contribute to the community by adding your thoughts to the collage. This site’s purpose is to inspire you as an individual and bring attention to those hard-working individuals who deserve it. Here are the following guidelines on how to best engage with the astrometrical community

Please Do:

Interact with others and voice your opinions on the blog and featured posts

Be respectful and patient with others on the site

Give constructive feedback on your experience on Astrometrical

Please don’t:

Use any form of hate speech, whether it be racism, sexism, homophobia, or any other form of discrimination

Post links  to your own pages to “self-promote” or any other forms of spam

Breach privacy of others on the site by posting personal information (doxing)

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(Process Post #12) It’s A Wrap

Last week of classes, and it true said that goodbyes are hard. PUB101, what a class I must say! Took it as an elective, had no idea what I am getting into but actually I got into a lot of good stuff. This course was all about me, from me, and for me. Here I was allowed to be creative and do things that I loved. Being honest, apart from Computer Science “app development” classes, this was the class that seemed practically. 

The things that I learned in this course are as follow and not limited to: 

  • Got hands on experience with WordPress.
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Action – Getting Things Done, By Doing Things

Confessions From A To-Do List Addict

I admit it. I love creating to-do lists.

When I am creating to-do lists, I envision what I will accomplish and often think that simply by having that baseline understanding of what needs to be done, I will be able to accomplish what I set out to.

It is magnificent and gratifying.

However, oftentimes my to-do lists end up being a sham.

What I claim I will accomplish in a day, often ends up being too much to handle.

And sometimes, my extensive to-do lists are not actually so extensive. For, instead of saying what actually needs to be done they provide a vague suggestion of what should be done.

Over the course of the current Fall semester, I have come to the realization it is not the creation of to-do lists which accomplishes things. It is the actions that enable their completion.

This may sound obvious, but admittedly it is something that I need to remind myself of constantly.

Action is what accomplishes tasks, not planning.

The Job-To-Be-Done

This semester, I have learned much about a framework titled jobs to be done.

Jobs to be done, is about framing problems in a way that explains the benefits a user wants to receive, as opposed to observing issues with the current way in which the user receives similar benefits.

For instance, John wants to complete his assignment, to do so John needs to overcome a long strenuous research process, followed by extensive analysis where he will be required to synthesize the facts that he discovered during research. In this situation, the job-to-be-done is the completion of the assignment. That is where the problem lies.

Accomplishing the job, moves the user’s life from one state, to a preferred one. The way in which they can accomplish this job varies (Klement, 2016). The role of an entrepreneur is to help users complete their jobs to be done in easier ways.

When I create a to-do list, the to-do list itself is only a part of the process that is enabling me to be productive. The creation of the to-do list is not the job-to-be-done, it is an ancillary effort that enables the job-to-be-done which is the completion of the task requiring the to-do list.

In creating this post, I am hoping to explain to you, the audience, that action is the key to productivity and that to-do lists alone accomplish nothing. A secondary purpose for creating this message is to explore research done by others and learn new things for myself about to-do lists and action.

The job-to-be-done for me in creating this post is to communicate this message and learn things for myself.

Accomplishing this requires an extensive amount of additional work and while that work most certainly needs to be done, communicating this message and learning more about the subject is the job-to-be-done.

Action Accomplishes, Not Planning

Once again, planning is useful. Creating to-do lists, detailed schedules, and outlines are incredibly useful tools. They are also essential parts to the productivity system that I have established for myself, but the truth of the matter is. Creating to-do lists does not accomplish anything. Doing the work itself does.

To challenge myself on this, I am writing this post with no prior planning. I am simply researching as I go, with a vague outline of how I want to construct this message in my head.

In fact, when I put my fingers to the keyboard and type out the words that you are reading on your screen right now, I feel a certain sense of presence that I fail to engage in, when I am planning.

Planning is great, but it’s also easy to get lost and distracted when planning. While I am most certainly not an expert, my theory behind this is that accomplishing a task requires a lot more attention than simply planning out what you need to do for that task. That extra attention you are required to pay fosters greater commitment, and as a result of this commitment you become more engaged in the work that you are doing.

Doing things requires commitment and once you have committed it is often harder to turn back (see the sunk cost fallacy), when you can no longer turn around, you will accomplish what you set out to do.

Action accomplishes, not planning.

Planning Enables

I must admit, when creating this post there was an act of planning. The truth of the matter is, everything impactful you do requires some degree of planning. 

When planning it is critical to recognize what it is that you want to accomplish, then you can realize steps that will enable you to get there.

For instance, when creating this post, I realized that I wanted to make a post about the importance of doing things as opposed to the importance of planning things, and the step that I chose to get me to the creation of this post was simply putting my hands to the keyboard and typing away to communicate the message I want to share.

Thankfully, Not Everything Goes According To Plan

Things do not always go according to plan. Your current self who is creating the plan may see that as a bad thing, however oftentimes it actually is a good thing.

If things went to plan everytime, you would know exactly what is going to happen.

That would be very boring. 

Thankfully, uncertainty looms in everything we do.

Oftentimes we go out with a plan, sometimes everything happens in accordance with it, but I would argue more often that not things do not.

However, it is critical you realize the reason for this is not because planning is bad, rather it occurs because we learn new things when doing things that we were not aware of when we were planning.

For instance, this entire subsection under the heading “thankfully, not everything goes according to plan,” was not planned. However, I do believe that it is a critical part of the story that I am writing about and you are reading right now.

Act, Adjust, Plan

In the book, The Lean Startup by Eric Ries, Eric describes a framework for startups he calls build, measure, learn. Building is about creating something, measuring is about examining what that things does, and learning is about improving that thing that you have built. This process is notably iterative, meaning that you are meant to do it over and over again. 

Here, I would like to propose an analogous iterative framework for the completion of tasks in everyday life. 

Act, recognize, plan.

Acting is about getting started on what it is that you want to do.

Recognizing is about realizing changes that need to be made to what it is that you are doing.

Planning is about incorporating what it is that you have recognized into an actionable plan to accomplish the job-to-be-done.

Acting is how you get started, recognizing is how you learn about what you are doing, and planning is realizing the best way to do what you need to do.

Going through this process repeatedly is almost automatic when you start by acting. However, cognitizing and recognizing it can also be incredibly helpful for individuals who struggle to get started.

For me, this means that sometimes the to-do lists need to be developed after I start a task, rather than before.

If you need to begin, just act.

References

Klement, A. (2016). What is jobs to be done? Jobs to be done. https://jtbd.info/2-what-is-jobs-to-be-done-jtbd-796b82081cca

Community Guidelines

Community Guidelines

I have decided to enable comments on my site. However, please be respectful with all your comments. I will reserve the right to delete the following types of comments:

 

  • Comments that use slurs
  • Comments that threaten me or any other person
  • Comments that are blatantly racist, sexist, ableist, homophobic, or transphobic
  • Comments that are completely irrelevant to the topic
  • Spam 
  • Hate speech or any content that advocates for violence

If you violate any of the above, your comment will be deleted, and you will be blocked from commenting again. 

 

If you have any questions about the comment section, please email me at selawa@sfu.ca.


However, if you have a different opinion on a topic than me, please feel free to voice it in the comment section. I am not a trained doctor, psychologist, dietitian, or personal trainer, so if you have expertise in any of those areas, I would especially love to hear your feedback. I want this website’s comment section to be a place for open dialogue where we can all learn from one another.  

Transmedia Integration- Week 11

Creating a journey for a reader through multiple platforms and keeping them invested by continuously adding more layers to the original topic is the premise of Transmedia Integration. In Kevin Britteny Lauren’s blog (2013) they detail how the internationally famous media franchise Pokémon has withstood the test of time through Transmedia Integration. They quote Henry Jenkins’s breakdown of transmedia storytelling, “a transmedia text does not simply disperse information: it provides a set of roles and goals which readers can assume as they enact aspects of the story through their everyday life” (2013). 

The blog then describes how Pokémon has used transmedia integration through couple of key points. They state that Pokémon has made its content very accessible and that anyone can easily follow along. They also state how Pokémon engrosses viewers by surrounding them with different types of Pokémon content on different platforms and allows them to enact aspects of the story in everyday life. These three aspects, accessibility, storytelling, and real-life application make up the success story of Pokémon and had me thinking about how I could apply this to my own blog. 

The first idea that I thought of was branching onto Instagram and making an archive page. That was the original inspiration for this blog in the first place, so it made me happy to know that I’m able to come full circle. For those who do not know, an archive page is a showcase of aesthetics of all kinds, arranged in a collage type of format. The main difference between the archive page and my blog right now is that it is harder to write as much detail about the piece of art in the Instagram caption. My next idea is to also create art showcasing content on Tiktok. At first, I was a little stumped on how to do this as on Tiktok it is not as simple as finding a cool piece of work and clicking upload, there has to be more to the content for it to be successful on Tiktok. An idea that I then came up with is explaining the background of the artist and how the art was created in a more commentary style of video. I thought of this by thinking about one of my favorite Tiktok content creators known as songpsych. She gives breakdowns of songs, provides background for why a song was created, and teaches fun facts related to music. I think that many people may enjoy this blueprint of content geared toward art instead of music. Those are just two simple ways that I can get started with Transmedia Integration, after I take those first two steps, I hope to continue branching out to even more platforms to fully engage my viewers throughout their lives. 

 
Example using songpsych's video format

References:

Kevinbrittenylauren.wordpress.com. (2013). “Pokemon as transmedia storytelling“

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The Power Of Positive Self Talk

What is self-talk?

Humans internally communicate with themselves throughout the day, knowingly or unknowingly. This communication is referred to as “self talk.” Self-talk is programmed into our minds, and it is an integral part that either lifts the person up or makes them fall.

Why is positive self-talk important?

Positive self-talk is when the internal communication focuses on positive aspects and makes a person feel good about themselves. Positive self-talk has several advantages for our mental health. The major benefits of positive self-talk are increased self-esteem and better stress management. For instance, this 2019 study showed that students who practised positive self-talk before delivering a speech experienced lower levels of anxiety. Similarly, another 2020 study shows that positive self-talk had motivating effects on the athletes.

Some examples of positive self-talk include: “I didn’t succeed, but at least I tried”; “I am proud of how far I have come”; “I am not afraid of the outcome; I will keep my focus on the present.”

I would recommend you watch the following video by Swami Mukundananda, where he describes it nicely.

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Process Post #10: Updates to Tess Drives Website

I have made some notable adjustments to my website ahead of both the peer review and second round of feedback from our TA Lauren. I added a recent posts section to my homepage, updated the featured posts section and have done some initial alt text adjustments to the photos across the website.

It took me a while to figure out how to put a recent posts section onto my homepage. Since my homepage runs on Elementor, it was only possible to add in a recent posts section if I had Elementor Pro—which I was definitely not paying for. I could have used some html coding but I have never took a comp-sci course in my life so I was also not going to go down that route. Instead, I was able to add a recent posts section from the WordPress side and that fit the glove perfectly! I was able to display both my public posts and my Pub 101 posts that have dates to clearly show when they were posted. I feel like Lauren would definitely appreciate this when she’s grading my work…

For my featured posts page, I looked to Lauren’s feedback from round one and she told me it would be nice to have the titles of the posts under the featured posts photos. Initially, I did it that way because I was struggling to add text under the images, but through some careful trial and error, I was able to figure it out! And I have to say, it looks much clearer now as to which image belongs to which Tess Drives post. I also updated the three posts to reflect more current posts that my viewers may be interested in. The difference between recent posts and featured posts is that the recent posts are chronologically ordered from oldest to newest and featured posts are random posts to catch the attention of readers.

Last but not least, I had some free time to add some alt text to most of my images on my website. It was a pretty simple process, I just had to go into WordPress and go to my media library and individually choose the photos to add alt text. I found it odd that on the public facing side of things, you can’t actually view the alt text without using the “inspect” function. I guess I was expecting something similar to Twitter’s alt text where you can click into the “ALT” badge and view the alt text from there. I like this touch, I am going to see if there’s a plugin I can install to my website to have alt text show like that.

(Peer Review #3) Reviewing SarahJoyElawa

Introduction 

This is the third peer review of PUB101. In this peer review, I will be looking over the audience and marketability dimensions of one of my PUB101 peers, Sarah Elawa.

Sarah’s website: https://sarahjoyelawa.com

Sarah’s website is focused on self-care, and it is a challenge that she has given herself to track healthier habits in her life. Likewise, the content of my website also has somewhat similar content, which falls under the more general term “self-help.”

This review can act as a guide for both of us, as it will set the tone for things that I can get inspired by from Sarah’s website and some things that she can take away from this review.

Audience Reach

Sarah’s website is about her healthy life experiences and can be called a lifestyle blog. Lifestyle blogs are really fun to follow, in my opinion, and have a diverse audience that shows interest in such a genre. As we have talked about in lectures, people scan through the website to decide whether they want to stay connected and keep following for more. I get the same positive aura right from the home page, which makes me keep coming back for more. I would like to make a suggestion following that: as it is a lifestyle blog and all about Sarah, it would be quite interesting to see a challenge or task that audience members should perform every week to keep them engaged. Keep a water journal, for example, and record how much water you drank this week, and then comment down below.

In terms of targeting the audience, this website delivers what the audience likes and prefers. The audience likes to see health and fitness content, and popularity among the audience is increasing year after year (data.ai, 2022). Sarah’s website has a lot of potential to create an audience base targeting all the age groups. Older audiences prefer fitness-related content, while Gen Z prefers meditation, so the cherry on top is that Sarah covers both. Great job there!

Marketability

One aspect of marketing we have talked about in class is that in order to reach a large audience, it is important to be present everywhere—on social media, YouTube, your website, etc. As Steve (2022) says, success in content is given if you can reach the largest audience possible. One suggestion I can make to Sarah is that in order to reach the largest audience, social integration would help her a lot. Especially if she is comfortable using YouTube, she can make a lifestyle vlog, and I would be more than happy to subscribe. The type of content Sarah is making would be much more interesting if it were delivered in video format, as visual data encourages engagement.

She can begin monetizing and creating branded content once she has a sizable tribe of die-hard fans or followers. For instance, paid product reviews; creating her own merchandise, like a vitamin tracking chart; water bottles; etc. Because she is a publishing major, I would insist on keeping this website and expanding it over time.

Conclusion 

Overall, I really enjoyed reviewing Sarah’s website. It was aesthetically pleasing, and the content was fruitful. It was so good to see how like-minded creators are doing, and it inspires me even further to keep posting helpful content out to my audience. As said, there is still some room for improvement in areas like social integration, some further tips to engage the audience, and marketing aspects. However, this website is just a few months old, and there is a long way to go. Hopefully, if you will be keeping the website, it will be pleasant to see how it turns out.

References 

data.ai. 2022. State of Mobile 2022. http://posiel.com/outline/full-semester-outline/dataai__state_of_mobile_2022__en/

Pratt, S. 2022. Week10: Revisiting Analytics, SEO, and Audience (Nov 15). The Creativity Business. https://creativitybusiness.substack.com/p/embracing-the-power-of-niches?utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=email

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(Process post 9): Marketing and Publishing For Your Audience

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Mini-Assignment #5: My Online Self

Mini-Assignment #5: My Online Self

Preface

As part of the class that I am taking which has resulted in the creation of the website you are viewing, I must complete some mini-assignments. 

This post is one of those mini-assignments. 

For this assignment, we were asked to create an infographic summarizing our online selves.

What I created is below!

The Infographic

infographic about my website.

Regarding Monetization: What Can and Should Be Monetized?

Regarding Monetization: What Can and Should Be Monetized?

Did you know you can monetize a wedding?

Many weddings involve large gatherings of people. Those people are an audience, who are all likely to share some similar interests.

Marketers want to capture large audiences with similar interests and they do so by paying for advertisements.

To monetize your wedding, you can sell promotional space to advertisers.

Weddings are expensive so recouping costs by any means possible just makes sense.

Monetize your life

Today, there are opportunities to monetize everywhere.

You can do things such as:

  • Leverage your network of friends and sell them products you believe would improve their lives.
  • Make above-average content about your everyday life and get sponsored.
  • Write a blog like this one and run advertisements.

Now, just because you can monetize everything, should you?

Deciding what to monetize

While it is simple enough to live life in a manner to maximize profits (this is what corporations do), it is not typically the way that most people desire to live their lives. 

However, although maximizing profits may not be directly what we want, we can take lessons from corporations and implement them in our own lives.

When faced with the choice of monetization, I think the following:

  1. What are the costs of monetizing this (social, financial, environmental, etc)?
  2. What are the benefits of monetizing this (social, financial, environmental, etc)?
  3. Do the benefits outweigh the costs?
  4. If yes, is this something I am comfortable monetizing and will not regret in five years?
  5. If yes, go ahead and monetize.

Choosing whether to monetize or not, really comes down to a cost-benefit analysis and a review of one’s own feelings in regard to the item you are thinking about monetizing. 

Conclusion

Always look for creative ways to monetize your life. Your and your friend’s attention and time are valuable, so allow others to pay for it. Have a system to decide what is worth paying for and what is not.

(Mini Assignment 4): Infographics

Taking Care Of Your Clothes

This short article is going to go over how to take care of your pieces and why.

Why Should I Care?

The main reason you should care is obvious; why ruin a piece of clothing when you can take care of it and not have to buy another one?

The second is a bit more complicated. When you take care of your clothes you ensure that they wont be in the trash, this helps reduce the insane amount of waste that the fashion industry is responsible for. It also ensures that you won’t buy another piece, this helps reduce your carbon footprint as there is no need to transport the garment to you.

Cold Water Wash

This is a no-brainer, if you’re not washing towels or bath mats there is no need to wash something in hot water. When you wash something in warm water you damage your clothes in two ways. The first is what the heat does to your fabric, when cotton is exposed to heat it looses its elastic properties, causing it to become more stiff and fragile, breaking down the fibres. The second way it damages your clothes is how it fades the colour, when the hot water seeps into the fabric it tends to cause dye to release itself from the fabric, changing the original colour of the wash.

The only time you wouldn’t cold water wash something is when you have to hand wash the garment.

Hang Drying

This is super simple, hang dry everything you can, especially cotton pieces like shirts, hoodies, and sweats. When something is put into the dryer it removes the elasticity of the fabric, shrinking it and weakening the fibres. This is most prevalent in wool and cotton pieces.

Another way to dry things is to lay them flat, by laying them flat you prevent the weight of the fabric stretching the piece out. Honestly this is only really necessary with wool pieces as the knit can be loosened with gravity

Hand Washing

Hand washing is a huge pain, the only time you should do with is with wool and raw denim. Raw denim is un-bleached and unwashed denim which when washed looses a lot of its dye. Wool when washed can shrink like crazy, with cold water or hot. The best way to hand wash is the fill up a tub or a container with cold or barely lukewarm water with a little bit of gentle detergent and just scrunch the clothing.

By doing this you help maintain the original look and feel of the piece.

How Often

Washing clothes every time you wear them is a very dangerous idea, the only time you should wash something is when you sweat in them or get them dirty. The one thing you should wash every time is socks and underwear (DUH).

When you wash something every time you damage the fibres, regardless of how careful you are.

How To Store Clothes

OK, you washed your clothes, dried them, and now you have to put them away.

The first thing you need to do is to see how much space you have, I don’t have a clue how big of a space you have so I’m going to assume you have a mega mansion and your closet space is the size of a small country.

Shirts: I think that folding shirts on top of one another helps prevent maintaining the shape of the shoulders while also allowing your to find them easily, the only time you would hang them up is when they are a button-up or if you have very high quality hangers.

Pants: Pants should be always hung up, it helps so much with storage and makes them far easier to find, 20 pairs of jeans are hard to tell from one another when you only see the front of them.

Sweaters: Sweaters should be folded, no discussion. Gravity kills knit pieces by stretching them out, fold them in your closet and stack them on top of each other.

Tops and Jackets: Jackets and thick tops like hoodies or sweatshirts should be hung up with think hangers to prevent damaging the shoulders of the piece.

Shoes: Don’t be gross, have a shelf or container for your shoes so the dirt doesn’t get on your floor, anytime I go to a friends house and I see their shoes just laying around a little part of my middle-eastern soul dies

Fighting My Urge To Consume

Throughout my articles I have spoken on how lowering your consumption is a necessary part of being part of the fashion community, but what have I done to do this?

Before My Epiphany

Before I was educated on the impact fashion has on the enviroment and the awful things it does to those in sweatshop I was just like any other person. I would buy clothes in mass quantities without thinking, every week I would have another pair of shoes or some clothes arriving at my front door. At first it felt amazing, I was fulfilling a need that nearly every single person in a capitalist society has, a need to consume.

What Made Me Change?

While non-stop buying was nice I began to realize that no matter what I bought I still felt that I had nothing to wear. It felt as if my closet was useless, its only purpose being to store my impulse bought clothes. One day I sat down and went through my closet and I was shocked to uncover a pattern I have created. I would buy a new piece, wear it everyday for two weeks, get tired of it, and then not know what else to wear, this whole time I had been restricting my imagination and creativity.

I knew then that I had to lower my consumption, not only for my own creativity, but also for the environment.

What About Today?

Now while I do still buy clothes it is far less than before, I now often buy one piece once a month rather that 4-5 times a week. While ideally I would not buy anything at all, this is a start, and thats all it takes.

Process Post: A Change

For this process post, I decided to completely change my website.

I won’t have much to say in this post but I feel like you can see the bulk of my work on the site.

I thought that my site’s current theme was not as user-friendly as it could be, the first thing I did was find a theme that supported everything I would need. After finding a theme I ensured that all the necessary menus that were needed would be present. I included a few new widgets and a playlist as well.

I feel like all the things I changed were for one reason, the main one being that it helps the website to be easier to use. Even if I have the most interesting website on the planet it won’t matter if someone cant uses it. By redoing the site I have ensured that when my audience interacts with me it is as easy as possible, allowing them to focus on the content.

The Yeezyfication Of Fashion

Recently it seems that everyone is following one man’s style

The Year Of Ye

This year something very strange has happened in the world of fashion, one man has completely influenced it. That man was Ye (formally Kanye West). Ye has overtaken what fashion is in recent months, with many taking inspiration if not just copying his new style.

What is Ye’s new style?

Ye’s new style mostly stems from his friendship with Demna, Balenciaga’s new creative director. His style is often composed of rubber boots, slim jeans, and face masks. This style while seemingly simple does have merit, it creates a new silhouette, rubber boots are an amazing piece to have in your wardrobe.

What’s Wrong With It?

I think the main issue with this new style is how it has been received recently. While I believe that taking inspiration from people is a great way to build outfits, there is a huge difference between taking inspiration and just flat-out copying someone’s style. Many people have just simply taken the exact pieces Ye wears and tried to pass it off as a cool outfit but in reality, it’s just the ability to have money to spend on expensive clothes. This isn’t just regular people either, its celebrities, fashion houses, just about everyone who wants a piece of the Ye pie.

I think that it’s an awesome style, but when people just copy others it restricts innovation and perpetuates the fashion cycle.

Peer Review #2: Joanna Lin

This week I will be reviewing my classmate Joanna Lin’s website, Joanna Lin. This website is Joanna’s outlet to share her creative journey as a graphic designer, videographer, and photographer, in hopes of being a source of artistic inspiration to others. 

Homepage

Hi Joanna! At first glance at your website homepage, my eyes are immediately drawn to the graphic image of yourself. This image is so cool! I think this graphic of yourself is a great homepage image as this site is all about YOUR creative journey as a designer. I also like how you introduce yourself with the tag line, “Hi, I’m Joanna”, and that the subheader indicates your creative skills. Something I might consider adding to this subheader is your website’s tagline. Instead of sharing your mission statement in your “About Me” section, I think it would fit better on the homepage of your website. This way readers know right away what to expect from your site. 

I’m here to share my creative journey as a designer, videographer, and photographer, hopefully inspiring others and creating some laughs on the way.”

In your last peer review, Briana Carniel suggested “there could be more examples of Joanna’s work on her home page, so viewers get a better grasp at the content she develops.”, and I completely agree. There is quite a bit of open white space, and while I appreciate the clean aesthetic, since your website is about your journey as a “creative”, I think you should utilize the homepage to feature more of your wonderful creations!

Navigation Menu

The JL in the top left corner of your website which displays the menu is a design element that I appreciate! Having your initials there makes the website look more professional and the pink accent of the box makes it obvious to readers that they should click there.

One thing I might consider changing about the navigation menu is deleting the grid option. When I click on the grid option (the second icon to the side of the menu), it makes the menu page options disappear. I’m not sure why this is happening, but since there is no use for this button, I would eliminate it from the side of the menu. 

At the bottom of the navigation menu, I like that you have embedded social media icons linked to these platforms where readers can keep up with your other content. 

About Me Page

I like the way you have displayed the images on the About Me page! The images frame the text nicely and it’s appealing to the eye. Your write-up about yourself is well written and gives readers the inside scoop about you. 

Again, I like the fact that you have added social media icons at the bottom of this page with links to these platforms. The more places for readers to view your content, the better! 

Projects Page

I like the idea of having a Projects page to document your creative work. I might consider changing the title of this page to “Creative Portfolio” as appose to just “Projects”. “Creative Portfolio” sounds more professional and implies that the work you are sharing is completed, whereas “Projects” might give the impression that these ventures are still in the works.

Blog: Photo & Video

I enjoyed scrolling through the content you have on the Photo and Video pages! It’s very cool to see your creative process and the final product come together. I am a little confused however how the blog section of your website is different from the Projects page. For instance, the “Sound Design: Soundscape Composition” post and the “Video: Buttshy” post are both academic design projects that share your creative process and the final product, yet these posts are not under the Projects page. In my mind, it makes more sense to post all completed design work/projects under a “Creative Portfolio” page, and then utilize the “Blog” page for content such as how-to videos, unboxings, your creative journey, etc. 

Posts’ Cover Photos

When your blog posts are displayed, it would be nice to see a cover photo go with the title of the post. Especially since your website is so visual, adding a cover photo to your posts might entice readers to check out your content.

Utilization of Social Media

You have done a great job embedding social media icons with links to their respective platforms throughout your site. If you want to make it even more clear where your readers can follow you, you could consider creating a separate page specifically for your social media links and adding it to your navigation menu.

In terms of how you have used your social media sites, I think you’ve done a good job to post content relevant to the concept behind your website. I would however suggest keeping your user name consistent on all of these platforms (if possible for you to change it!) so they’re easily identifiable as you and align with your Joanna Lin “brand’.

Final Thoughts

Overall, I am very excited to see where you take your website, Joanna! I’m very impressed with your design, photography, and videography skills and I’m excited to see more of your creative journey.

Best of luck!